Serve Your Content in Bite-Sized Chunks

August 10th, 2009

Forget about swine flu, the next big pandemic is attention deficit disorder. Nowadays, we need superhuman powers to ignore the daily distractions that prevent us ever reading to the end of a page. Smartphone users, Googlers and twitterers are professional skimmers, absorbing a few lines of your carefully crafted content before hopping to the next message. Forget about thinking big or waxing lyrical. Small thoughts are far more digestible!

Ø  Get Straight to the Point

Don’t spend time building to a crescendo. You’ll end up burying your call-to-action at the bottom of a long page, and may find readers aren’t prepared to scroll that far. Instead, spill your candy in the lobby, in full view of everyone. Use the top of the page to let your audience know how you can help.  An attention-grabbing headline and an intro containing your key messages will work wonders. Once you’ve engaged your readers, you can fill the remaining space with all the juicy details.

 

Ø  Learn to be a Ruthless Editor

Write your first draft and then cut it in half. It’s as simple as that!

 

Ø  Tell Your Story in Headlines

Some skimmers only read heads and sub-heads. Make every word count, and use visual tricks to help your headlines pop off the page. That way, anyone who’s just skimming the surface will still leave with the full message.

 

Amanda O’Donovan spoon-feeds her clients with easily digested content. You can contact her at 416.456.3859 or amanda@amandaodonovan.com.

Beat the Recession with Cloud Commuting

July 19th, 2009

 

Say hello to your newest, smartest resource. The Cloud Commuter is highly skilled, eco-friendly, doesn’t take up valuable office space and won’t be asking for health benefits. California-based elance, the leading site for online work, suggests, “More people are making the online workplace their new office and are logging in to get to work. Three trends have come together to make this possible. Companies are looking for greater flexibility and efficiency, more professionals are choosing to work independently, and managing online work has become easier than ever.”

 

As budgets are wrung dry, more and more businesses are turning their backs on traditional staffing in favour of hiring independent professionals when they need them. Why take the risk of committing to a permanent headcount when you can drink from the talent pool whenever you want to?

 

Whatever you’re searching for, there’s a Cloud Commuter who can provide you with exactly the expertise you need — and, when the job’s done, it’s perfectly OK to say goodbye until the next project deadline comes screaming into view. Think of your relationship with your Cloud Commuter as a date. The first encounter may have you coming back for more, but there’s no obligation to put a ring on it!

 

Feeling liberated? You should be, because when you make a remote hire you keep your fixed costs in check at the same time as you put yourself in the hands of the real experts. What’s not to love? Whether you tap into elance, or Google your local talent, you’ll be spoilt for choice — now there’s a little ray of sunshine.

 

Amanda O’Donovan is a Cloud Commuter who provides her clients with expert communications advice. You can contact her at 416.456.3859 or amanda@amandaodonovan.com. 

Why you Should Think About Content Constantly

July 3rd, 2009

 

I was reading the latest from Joe Pulizzi at blog.junta42.com when his posting about Content Strategy as the Future of Marketing caught my eye. He talks about a recent presentation by Kristina Halvorson from Brain Traffic, a Minneapolis-based web agency that thinks about content constantly. She advocates that concise, clear, compelling content should be part of a master plan. Structure it well and make it easy to find, as well as impossible to ignore, and you’ll drive sales at the same time as you deepen relationships.

Unfortunately some companies are still completely ignoring the importance of producing a constant stream of engaging content  to attract and nurture clients. And, while others are waking up to the power of establishing an informative dialogue with past, present and future advocates of their products and services, very few understand the strategic importance of content. It’s not just a handy little gadget in the communications tool belt…….it should be the hub of your entire marketing strategy. Ignore it at your peril.

Your audience will only read your content if it’s relevant and useful. Joe Pulizzi suggests thinking more like a publisher than a marketer, hiring a content strategist and viewing your content as a valuable asset that draws on multiple sources to educate and entertain.

For more, take a look at Kristina Halvorson’s presentation on SlideShare.

Content Strategy: The Future of Marketing

Amanda O’Donovan helps her clients plan, structure, present and refresh clear and compelling content. You can contact her at 416.456.3859 or amanda@amandaodonovan.com. 

Are You Driven to Abstraction?

June 3rd, 2009

If you think that communication is all about words not images, you may find that you’re writing in abstract terms. People remember pictures, not concepts. So, when your talk turns abstract, your readers start to drift — they’re simply not engaged. If there’s nothing concrete in what you’re saying, there’s nothing for them to identify with. Much like passive voice, abstract writing can sound pompous, evasive, vague or muddled. Peppered with confusing strings of abstract nouns, sentences can quickly run out of control, and you’ll find yourself using valuable page space to say nothing at all.

So how do you recognize these abstractions, and what can you do to weed them out of your copy? Let’s look at some concrete examples!

Ø  A Family Entertainment Experience — A wasted phrase like this is likely to have as many meanings as it has readers. Are we talking about watching Grandpa do karaoke or Mom fall out of a canoe? Is this about taking a trip to Disney or experiencing the excitement of Cirque du Soleil for the very first time? Or maybe we’re simply talking about getting in the minivan and munching through a bucket of popcorn while watching a feel-good movie that’s suitable for all ages.

 

And here’s another one: Nintendo describes the Wii as “a unique social gaming experience.” If you’d just emerged from a coma, would you know that the Wii is a video game that gets people off the couch and brings them together in front of their TV screens to bowl and box or play golf, tennis and baseball?

 

Ø  Negative Equity — This means that you’ve borrowed money to buy something that’s now worth less than you paid for it. But, while I think you’re talking about a house with a mortgage, someone else is imagining a car or a boat. If you don’t paint the picture your readers will make up their own story.

 

Ø Our Leading-Edge Facilities — Are we talking washroom, sports arena or hotel? And what makes these facilities so “leading-edge”? For argument’s sake, let’s say you run a hotel and you’re trying to increase room occupancy. You won’t attract any visitors by talking about facilities. You have to give your readers every reason to want to make a booking, so they have to picture themselves as guests in your hotel. Tell them about your new ergonomic beds and luxurious linens. Let them know about the celebrity chef in your restaurant. Give them every reason to want to reserve a decadent spa treatment or challenge themselves to a workout in your fully equipped gym.  

 

If you’re writing for technology markets it’s quite likely that you’re even more abstract than most. We’re in the habit of talking about platforms, systems, solutions, applications, configurations, standalones, bleeding edges, user interfaces, seamless transitions, vertical markets, intellectual property and cloud technology. We dehumanize real people, who we’re hoping will buy our products and services, by calling them end users and customer bases. Isn’t it about time we all started talking to our clients in a much more meaningful way?

 

Amanda O’Donovan works as a freelance copywriter in Toronto, Canada. You can contact her at 416.456.3859 or amanda@amandaodonovan.com.  

Grade Your Gobbledygook

May 21st, 2009

 

Lexington MA-based David Meerman Scott is a Marketing Strategist and keynote speaker. David has partnered with Dow Jones Insight and HubSpot to weed out tired, overused and cliché-ridden business jargon from press releases, websites, case studies, whitepapers…….and just about any other kind of B2B communications you can think of. Read the posting below from David’s blog — or simply run straight to HubSpot’s Gobbledygook Grader to test your content for over-used gobbledygook phrases. If you feel really passionate about business clichés, you should also head over to Seth Godin’s Encyclopedia of Business Clichés. The list is currently at 360, and you can vote for your favourites.

Top Gobbledygook phrases used in 2008 and how to avoid them

Boston, MA – April 8, 2009 – David Meerman Scott is pleased to announce a partnership with Dow Jones and HubSpot to leverage and focus on innovative solutions for new and improved, next generation, cost effective, world class, high performance, value added outcomes.

Does the sentence above suck or what??

That’s how so many PR people write — using gobbledygook-laden phrases that are so overused to have become meaningless.

I have just completed an analysis of all 711,123 press releases distributed by North American companies in 2008 through Business Wire, Marketwire, GlobeNewswire, and PR Newswire. The project looked at 325 gobbledygook phrases from a variety of sources, with the detailed analysis on the number of uses for each phrase done using Dow Jones Insight.

So how do you avoid using gobbledygook?

Easy! Write using the words and phrases your buyers use. You can also run your press releases, web site text, brochure copy, resume or any other document through the brand new Gobbledygook Grader from HubSpot. The Gobbledygook Grader (released today) will give you a score based on how many over-used gobbledygook phrases you use and suggest ways to improve.

Here are the top 25 gobbledygook phrases used in press releases sent in North America 2008.

Rank Phrase # Uses in 2008

1.              Innovate

51,390

2.              Pleased To

48,762

3.               Unique

48,095

4.              Focused On

40,964

5.              Leading Provider

33,101

6.              Commitment

29,621

7.              Partnership

28,969

8.              New and Improved

20,167

9.              Leverage

19,243

10.           120 Percent

16,916

11.           Cost Effective

15,454

12.           Next Generation

15,371

13.           110 Percent

13,659

14.           Flexible

13,656

15.           World Class

13,407

16.           Robust

13,309

17.           High Performance

13,049

18.           Scalability

11,929

19.           Proud To

9,877

20.           Optimize

9,547

21.           Outcomes

9,329

22.           In Terms Of

9,217

23.           Value Added

8,725

24.           Easy to Use

8,398

25.           Metrics

6,851

Analysis of 711,123 press releases distributed in North America by Business Wire, Marketwire, GlobeNewswire, and PR Newswire in 2008. © 2009 by David Meerman Scott and Dow Jones. Copyright holders are licensing work under the Creative Commons License, Attribution 3.0 http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/us/

Gobbledygook terms were drawn from these sources:

 - Informal survey of my journalist friends in order to create The Gobbledygook Manifesto, first published in 2007.

- Suggestions within comments on the Gobbledygook Manifesto blog post.

- Seth Godin’s Encyclopedia of Business Clichés.

- This Paperclip is a Solution: A survey of general business and trade publication editors in September, 2006 by Dave Schmidt, VP, Public Relations Services at Smith-Winchester, Inc.

- The book Death Sentences: How Cliches, Weasel Words and Management-Speak Are Strangling Public Language by Don Watson

Resources:

- Take a look at the results for all 325 gobbledygook phrases

- Analyze your content using the HubSpot Gobbledygook Grader

- Read my original Gobbledygook Manifesto published in 2007

- Learn more about Dow Jones Insight, which I used for this analysis.

Disclosures: David Meerman Scott is on the board of advisors of HubSpot and he provides coaching services to Dow Jones Enterprise Media Group.

Amanda O’Donovan specializes in corporate communications. She lives and works in the Greater Toronto area, writing for clients in English-speaking markets — using as few clichés as possible.

 

What is Communication 2.0?

May 12th, 2009

 

 

Old world communication was about publication not participation. Small elitist groups delivered their messages to the masses, and remained firmly in command and control. In those days, we hoped people would stumble on our web content and we liked to think they’d find the information useful.

 

In a 2.0 world, it’s our job as communicators to orchestrate information, involving as many people and sources of knowledge as possible, and striking a meaningful, progressive dialogue with the people we want to buy our products and services. New world communication is about intimacy, interaction and innovation. And, while change is refreshing, our message must also be consistent, because many different groups will consume it.

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7 Ways to Communicate More Effectively

Teach Yourself to Lose Control

help your customers get what they want, instead of feeding them what you want

 

Talk About Their Problems not Your Products

feel the pain and present yourself as the healer

 

Be Responsive, Authentic and Dynamic

create a conversation, be honest and write energetically

 

Create a Content Democracy

expand your sources and understand that many people consume your message

 

Build an Architecture of Participation

maximize your message by encouraging contribution and harnessing collective intelligence

 

Show and Tell

describe and support your value by creating a connection to positive experiences

 

Balance and Juggle

make use of multiple channels of communication and don’t forget to refresh

 

For a closer look at how to communicate more effectively, download Communicating in a 2.0 World

 

Amanda O’Donovan is a Toronto-based professional writer who helps her clients communicate more effectively with their audiences. 

Marketing in a Downturn: Why Content is Crucial

April 28th, 2009

In the current climate, we’re all stretching budgets and making every last cent sing for its supper. It’s a cautious environment that results in a lot of ‘window shopping’ prior to purchase. Decision makers are clinging to the purse strings, carefully weighing their options before making a move to buy your products and services. They’re hungry for information that will help them make the right choices, and you must feed the need by providing them with valuable, relevant, educational content. High on the list of effective B2B lead generators are Newsletters, White Papers and Case Studies. These post-click marketing tools are part of a collection of bright, shiny FREE, informative objects you can dangle in front of online prospects (they’ll also work pretty hard for you offline). And, when the economy finally drags itself out of bed, you’ll have a jump start on all those companies who believed that decimating their marketing budgets would increase their profits.

In various blog postings, White Paper guru, Michael Stelzner, emphasizes the importance of focusing marketing efforts on creating valuable content. He points to a recent study by Junta42 that found, “Even in tough economic times, money is still flowing into content marketing initiatives…More than half (56%) of marketing and publishing decision makers plan to increase their content marketing spending for 2009.” The marketers surveyed said that they would invest in the following content this year:

·         Social Media (other than blogs) — 68%

·         enewletters/email — 60%

·         Blogs — 56%

·         Case Studies — 55%

·         Online Video — 51%

·         White Papers — 46%

·         Microsites — 43%

Did I hear someone at the back mutter that content creation is time-consuming? I’d have to agree with you. I do this for a living, and if you’re going to do a good job, you have to be prepared to put in the time it takes to research, interview, write and review…or set aside budget to outsource the writing. However, the return on investment can be substantial, when your creative, educational content leads to an informed buying decision and gives you a decided advantage over your competitors.

 

Amanda O’Donovan is a Toronto-based freelance writer who creates White Papers, Case Studies and Newsletters to provide her clients with valuable content and a competitive advantage. 

 

Why It’s Important to Keep Your Writing Active

April 21st, 2009

 

You may not be aware that you’re doing it, because self-diagnosis is rare. And, although many have searched for the cure, few people find it without expert help. It’s been responsible for destroying entire swathes of corporate content with its cloudy imprecision, unnecessary wordiness and lack of accountability. I’m talking about “Passive Voice,” and it’s very likely hiding in a piece of copy near you.

As a corporate writer, I’ve programmed myself to weed out passive voice and turn sentences into active, energetic, informative business tools. However, I find that many of my clients still struggle to identify a passive sentence, let alone fix it. Why is this so important, you ask? Wouldn’t we be better concentrating energy on clawing our way out of recession or brokering world peace? Possibly, but the problem is that a passive sentence is such a pale imitation of its active counterpart. It invariably contains more words, will probably be impersonal, will more than likely be evasive and generally conveys less information. Making an emotional connection with your audience is vital in a world of short attention spans, and you’ll do that far better if your writing voice is “active.”

Take these two sentences:

Passive voice is used by our company to ensure that we are shielded from the need for clarity of expression.

We use passive voice to avoid expressing ourselves clearly.

I’ve underlined the two instances of passive voice in the first sentence. When trying to eliminate passive voice, watch out for any verbs with an “ed” or “en” ending. The word “by” after a verb is also a giveaway. And know that when you write in passive voice, you risk tying yourself up in knots, quite apart from using more words than necessary to complete a sentence.

On a positive note, you can use passive voice to great effect to deflect attention from what’s really going on. It’s a perfect vehicle when you want to avoid having to define something or take responsibility for it. If you’re looking to evade or conceal, it’ll be your first choice. But, if your aim is to communicate clearly and engage your audience, you’d better keep your writing active.

Compare these two sentences:

An iPod was presented to the contest winner.

Ruby presented an iPod to the contest winner.

Which is less abstract and more informative? I’ll leave you to decide. Oh,  and before I go, do you know that you can configure Word to identify passive sentences?  By adding a style check to your spelling and grammar review, Word will give you a slap on the wrist every time you use passive voice. I’ve experimented with it and, although it’s not perfect, it’s certainly a step in the right direction:

·         Click Options from the Tools menu (Word Options on the Office button in O2007)

·         Select the Spelling and Grammar tab (Proofing from lefthand menu in O2007)

·         Click the Settings button

·         Under the Styles heading, select “passive sentences”

 

 

For more writing tips and opinions, download How to Create Marketing Content that Sells

 

Amanda O’Donovan is a Toronto-based freelance writer who tries to stay as active as possible. 

 

How to Choose a Freelance Business Writer

March 19th, 2009

 

Google “freelance writing services” and you’re likely to be spoilt for choice. Narrow your search by geography and you’ll still have more options than you can handle. Lurking amongst the search results you’ll find a selection of the good, the bad and the ugly. So, how do you make sure that the copywriter you choose is right for your project? In most cases, instinct and common sense will serve you well, but the following checklist may also be useful:

Ø  Content, Medium and Audience

Before you start your search, make sure you’re clear about the type of content you want to create, how you’ll deliver it and who will consume it. Are you looking for help with a variety of marketing communications projects, or do you need to find a subject matter expert who can write a whitepaper? Does your project focus on print or digital media? Who are you addressing, what is their level of expertise and what information are they looking for? When you’re clear about the purpose of your writing project, you’ll be better able to direct your search for a writer.

 

Ø  Project Scope

Are you looking for help in a copy crunch or trying to find a writer of record to work with regularly? When you start interviewing writers, you’ll need to be clear about the nature of the relationship and the volume of work involved.

 

Ø  Budget

Freelance copywriting rates vary considerably, from $50/hour at one end of the scale to around $150/hour at the other. In most cases, you get what you pay for, so beware of shopping in the bargain basement. In Toronto, expect an experienced corporate copywriter to charge between $100 and $120/hour. In many cases, hourly rates are simply useful as a benchmark to compare different writers.  As budgets are finite, most writers would expect to quote you an overall project fee.  For a more detailed review of rates, take a look at writers.ca.

 

It’s important to know that the fee you pay is not just for the time spent writing. A good writer will also budget time for research and review. Some experts suggest that effective writers will spend up to 75% of their time on planning, research and revisions, and only 25% committing words to the page.

 

Ø  Referrals

Although an Internet search may be a good way of exploring your options, the best way to find a great writer is by referral. Scour your network for suggestions, and spend time understanding the reasons for a referral. It’s important to make sure that the recommendations you receive coincide with the requirements for your project. Ask about writing style and also about working style, responsiveness and attention to deadlines etc.

 

Ø  Website and Portfolio

Spend the time exploring writers’ websites. The way writers present themselves online will often be very revealing. Pick through portfolios to check for writing expertise that coincides with your project brief. And take a look at client testimonials to find out why people value the writer’s skills.

 

Ø  Business Savvy and Common Sense

While there’s no substitute for common sense, make sure your writer can demonstrate good business sense too. If your project also requires subject-matter expertise and industry knowledge, ask the writer to provide you with examples of past work that will match your needs. Also, when you interview a writer, take note of how many questions he or she asks. More insightful and informed writers are likely to ask you questions and make suggestions.

 

Ø  Cultural Fit

It’s very important that you pick a writer who you’re going to feel comfortable working with. When you outsource, you’re creating a collaborative project between yourself, the writer and probably a number of content providers within your organization. Engaging a writer is more than a handoff…you’re in this together. If you’re working on a sizeable project, or creating a long-term relationship, it’s particularly important that your writer’s personality is compatible with your company culture.

 

Ø  Terms and Availability

Before you engage a writer for your project, make sure you are both clear about terms and timelines. A freelancer is likely to be working on a number of projects at once, so you need to know about availability and how that will affect deadlines. Make sure you are both aligned on briefing process. Will you be able to provide the writer with existing source documents, links to relevant websites, access to subject matter experts, time for brainstorming and interviews? How will you communicate with each other?  Do you prefer face-to-face meetings, emails, phone calls, messaging — or a combination of these? You should be clear about the number of rounds of revisions you expect from a writer and be able to give some indication of how quickly you will be able to review the content your writer submits. When clients ask me how long it takes to turn a project around, they are often unaware of how many delays there can be on their end, due to the number of people involved in the review process, varying workloads, vacation schedules etc.

 

As with any business venture, planning is important. By devoting time to research, by asking a series of careful questions and by setting out the parameters of your collaboration, you’re more likely to find yourself working with an excellent writer. And that’s time well spent to avoid costly and time-wasting mistakes, which could derail your project when you can least afford it.

 

Amanda O’Donovan is a Toronto-based freelance business writer with a passion for her clients’ products and an obsession for detail, deadlines and common sense. 

Five Reasons Why Your Business Should Blog

February 16th, 2009

 

 

OK, so I admit to being a bit of a born-again blogger. Now that I’m no longer a blog-virgin, I feel compelled to share my new-found enthusiasm for social media.

But what about you? Are you still struggling to work out how and why you should become a business blogger? The reasons are many, and they’re also compelling. With all due respect to attention spans, I’ve produced a condensed list of the most important reasons for you to blog. They may inspire you, but if they don’t, you could wake up tomorrow still hopelessly blogless. Perhaps you’re allergic to the writing process. Maybe you’re short on time.  Either way, please seek professional help. There are plenty of great writers who can blog on your behalf.

 

Why Blog?

 

One                    Your Competitors Are Doing It

Blogging has crossed the corporate divide. Many businesses in your market are already using blogs to communicate with their customers. And they’re listening when their customers talk back.  A blog is an excellent way to establish two-way communication in a 2.0 world.

 

Two                    You’ll Improve Your Search Ranking

Google likes to see changes in your website content, and it will reward you with higher rankings. When you write a blog that contains relevant business content, you’re disciplining yourself to create frequent content updates, and that makes you more attractive to the search engines.

 

On top of this, when people follow your blog, and link to your content or respond to your posts with comments, you’ll be attracting inbound traffic to your site, which is also good for your site ranking.

 

Three             You’ll Become A Thought Leader

When you create a blog that contains informative, ethical and entertaining content, you quickly establish yourself as an industry leader — and draw attention to your products and services. Writing a blog is also an excellent way of keeping up to date with all the latest trends in your industry.

 

Four                  Your Network Will Grow

Think of your blog as a conversational hub, an opportunity to network with anyone who comes into contact with your business. It’s a way of keeping in regular contact with customers, suppliers, channel partners, industry associations and employees.

 

Five                    You Can Test New Ideas

A blog is a great way of sounding out clients when you’re planning a new product, or you’re in the early stages of development. And, once you’ve launched a product, your blog can act as a forum for feedback, allowing you to correct faults and strengthen favourite features.

 

 

Amanda O’Donovan is a Toronto-based freelance corporate writer with a passion for business blogging. She’s thinking of tweeting too and would appreciate advice from any Twitter experts before she takes the plunge.